Ever since the industrial revolution, we have been using way too many machines and gadgets that release bad gases called fossil fuels. Fossil fuels are being trapped, creating extreme heat. Animals and people will lose their homes and living standards will become unbearable..
We need to stop this before it's too late.
I love the picture because it really fits with the topic. Your use of facts is great too.
ReplyDeleteI like the facts you used and the persuasion near the end
ReplyDeleteooo, I liked how you added a lot of facts and added the "..." at the end. It made it seem kind-of sad!
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